Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

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In the contemporary era, there many kinds of technology global. Nowadays, people to

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save

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in every field. There is myriad public work from their

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online. There is numerous merit of

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topic along with certain demerits as "every rose comes with thorns", I will present these in the upcoming paragraph. The

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and foremost advantages which come to my mind, in modern

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, who are working from their

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and they are taking any types of benefits. Those public save their

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. They can maintain their body.

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, one of my friends worked in a software company and he went to the office in the morning and

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came back evening daily. He wasted

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in between travelling almost 3 hours. Now, he changed his company and he is working from

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as well as he uses their 3 hours of exercise.

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, there is a very famous dictum "even the moon has its dark side"

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, there are few disadvantages who people are working online from their house. They are not serious in their work, not all employee but most of the public.

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, they are taking a big break in their shift and no any rules regulation of job. Many people are wasting

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and wasting company money.

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, one man is working from

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. he wakes up from bed before 5 minutes to his start job. In conclusion, it can be said that as "every coin has two sides" in the same way

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topic has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.