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Scientists believe that computers, not humans, will control cars in the near future. What are the reasons for that? Would this be a positive or a negative development?

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There is no doubt that technology plays an increasingly important role in our daily life.
Therefore
 a lot of scientists predict that we will have self-control vehicles in the near future and the cars are driven by humans will disappear.
Such
 predictions became possible due to the scientific developments in the field of artificial intelligence, active safety
car
 systems, the evolution of the Internet and universal availability for global positioning systems. I think it could have positive and negative consequences that I am going to discuss in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, I would like to discuss the positive sides. The widespread use of computer-controlled cars could lead to the release of a person from the need to drive a
car
. How would be nice to behold the beautiful picture throw the
car
 window
instead
 of the necessity to focus on
car
 control? Every person would get more spare time that he could spend on more pleasant things
such
 a sleeping or reading
for example
. The road traffic would become more relaxed and safer. There would be almost no
car
 accidents.
On the other hand
, a lot of people who have driving jobs will lose their jobs.
Moreover
, an interesting legal question is springing up before society: if a traffic accident between two cars were being controlled by computers happened, who would have to respond to that? Producer or owner of these vehicles? In conclusion, despite the desire of a lot of people to acquire a self-driving
car
, their widespread adoption will bring many social and legal problems.
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