Some people think that books are losing their importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

Many
people
believe that
books
are becoming less fundamental as a source of
knowing
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and leisure. I totally agree with
this
option because the
internet
represent
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a faster and cheaper solution to satisfy peoples' needs and wants.
First
of all, I strongly think that
internet
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the internet
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allowed
to
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us to
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resolve problems better than
books
. In fact, searching on the web solutions let
people
to
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save many times and be able to understand quickly their mistakes while buying manuals is a
longer
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process and not all the time
permit
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to resolve doubts.
In addition
,
books
are expensive,
in
particular
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university ones can cost even 100 euros each, and not all the students can afford
this
shopping. To
istance
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instance
distance
, many local bookshops are closing due to the spread of
internet
between the society because many
people
prefer
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save money and find the same information on the
internet
.
Secondly
, thanks to the development of entertainment website
people
can enjoy their time in various different ways and not only reading
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books
. New items like film streamings,
poadcast
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podcast
podcasts
and audiobooks allow
people
to do different experiences in their free times with the advantage of
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this
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these
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tools always ready to use.
For example
, nowadays thanks to smartphone and tablet
is
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possible to see
film
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and to listen
poadcast
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podcast
podcasts
everywhere with only a subscription
that is
very cheap and
convinient
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convenient
convenience
. To conclude, I think that the
internet
in the
next
years is going to replace
the
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books
because it absolves the same functions but in a better and less expensive manner.
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