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Today there are many cases of juvenile crime. This is happening because both parents now work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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One of the most pressing issues in modern society is youth crime. In most of the family now both father and mother are at job leaving their beloved kids at home alone, which contributing to increase
this
 trend of crime, some people say. In
this
 essay, I will examine the statement and put my opinion. Generally speaking,there are many reasons that could be considered as contributing factors to develop crime attitude among the youth. Perhaps the main contributing factor is the
neclear
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nuclear
 family concept where
parents
 are the only members at home to take care of Children.
Therefore
 if
parents
 step out for work there is nobody to look after them which was not the issue in
ealier
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earlier
 time, because
grand
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parents
 or other extended family members could take care. Due to
this
 modern family concept, when
yougsters
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youngsters
 are at home alone they become
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adventurous
 ,
therefore
 they try few things
differnetly
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differently
 , eventually get involved with crimes. Another reason
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 be considered for
this
 crisis is the increasing influx of
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global cultures. When the guardians out of
thier
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their
 reach , these greenhorns can watch online anything and everything for a certain period which again
agigate
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agitate
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 them to drive something wrong. As per recent data, In
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sates
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 , 30% of juvenile delinquency
occured
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occurred
 among those whose
parents
 are working outside and free internet access was one of the
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. In conclusion, it must be said that
this
 trend has become a complex
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 and very
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relevant
 to modern society. I am inclined to the opinion that juvenile should always be guided and patronised though
parents
 have to work outside as per today's demand to survive.
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