There are different kinds of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard these days?

Emotionally writing,
music
is the storehouse of energy that go deep into our soul.
Music
relaxes the mind and helps to reduce stress. There are times when
music
even cures diseases by reducing stress and anxiety.
Music
differs from different parts of the World. In
India
, it is like a religion. Carnatic
music
one
such
famous
music
in
India
that belongs to the southern part of
India
.
Although
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there
are
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a
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different kind of
music
,
the
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music
from films makes a major impact on the people of
India
.
Moreover
, Indian cinema has more
number of
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songs and
music
when compared to the other cinemas around the World.
However
, many people prefer to hear International or Western
music
more than regional ones. When it comes to international
music
, there are so many electrical instruments involved during the composition. A famous
music
director from the
tamil
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cinema industry names Ilayaraja
,
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always used to tell that,
music
is an art and when
an
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art is performed there should be a performance
that is
missing when the electronic instruments take control.
On the other hand
, the
music
coming from the non-electric instruments are so soothing to the ears and melting to the heart.
Hence
we can conclude
this
by saying that
music
is always rejuvenating no matter what and it is up to the taste of every
individuals
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to listen. So it is not that like which is important but it is up to the people's choice what they want to listen
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Anyways, it is human's nature to not seeing the worth of their own traditions.
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