The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat
The four pie charts compare how old the population is in Italy and
Yemen
in 2000 and gives a prediction of how those could change in 2050.
Overall
, it is possible to see that
Yemen
is a country with very low percentages of the old population,
while
in Italy there is a big amount of old people.
According to
the data provided in
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the population is divided almost equally between the two
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ages: from 0 to 14
years
with
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50% and from 15 to 49
with
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46%. People over 60
years
old are just the 3%.
In contrast
, Italy
it
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was characterized by a high number of people between 15 to 59
years
(61%), followed by +60 with 24%, seven-time more than
Yemen
. Unlike
Yemen
, the
group
from 0 to 14 are much smaller, just 14%. In both countries, predictions for 2050 show an increase in the
group
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over 60
years
old. But, if in
Yemen
it will rise by just 2%, in Italy the percentage will double the one in 2000.
Group
ages between 15 to 59 will grow in
Yemen
by around 10%,
on the
contrary
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it will fall in Italy from 61% to 46%.
Finally
, the younger
group
between 0-14 will decline in the two countries. In ,
Yemen
there will be an abrupt decrease of around 13%,
whereas
in Italy it will be
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around 3%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, group, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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