The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevat
The four pie charts compare how old the population is in Italy and
Yemen
in 2000 and gives a prediction of how those could change in 2050. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is possible to see that Linking Words
Yemen
is a country with very low percentages of the old population, Use synonyms
while
in Italy there is a big amount of old people.
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According to
the data provided in Linking Words
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Yemen
the population is divided almost equally between the two Add a comma
,Yemen
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group
ages: from 0 to 14 Fix the agreement mistake
groups
years
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with
50% and from 15 to 49 Change preposition
at
with
46%. People over 60 Change preposition
at
years
old are just the 3%.
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In contrast
, Italy Linking Words
it
was characterized by a high number of people between 15 to 59 Correct pronoun usage
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years
(61%), followed by +60 with 24%, seven-time more than Use synonyms
Yemen
. Unlike Use synonyms
Yemen
, the Use synonyms
group
from 0 to 14 are much smaller, just 14%.
In both countries, predictions for 2050 show an increase in the Use synonyms
group
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of
over 60 Change preposition
apply
years
old. But, if in Use synonyms
Yemen
it will rise by just 2%, in Italy the percentage will double the one in 2000.
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Group
ages between 15 to 59 will grow in Use synonyms
Yemen
by around 10%, Use synonyms
on the
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contrary
it will fall in Italy from 61% to 46%.
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Finally
, the younger Linking Words
group
between 0-14 will decline in the two countries. In ,Use synonyms
Yemen
there will be an abrupt decrease of around 13%, Use synonyms
whereas
in Italy it will be Linking Words
of
around 3%.Change preposition
apply
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