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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Most equipment and machinery are running on fossil
fuels
 and we are using them very fastly but at some point in time, these
resources
 will run out. We need to plan how we can save it to reduce unwanted usage and find alternative ways to produce
energy
 from natural sources. I will explain these points in the below paragraphs with examples. As using more fossil
fuels
 and consuming them unnecessarily will hamper our lives in the future, when these
resources
 have been depleted.
Moreover
, we need to take strict action to save our planet and
use
 renewable
energy
 and natural
resources
. To save these
resources
 need to take an action plan on how we can minimize the usage? using
energy
-efficient things will save power.
Moreover
, using public transportation to save
fuels
instead
 of drive the individual car.
For instance
, if possible go by a walk to the nearest market
otherwise
use
 public transport. Using carpooling,
use
energy
-efficient electronic equipment that consumes less
energy
. If we can do all these things
then
 only we can preserve these
resources
. The most suitable option for using fossil
fuels
 is natural
resources
. There are a plethora of natural
resources
 like the sun,
wind
 and water.
In addition
,
use
 solar power or
wind
energy
 to run the large machinery and producing electricity.
Moreover
,
use
 biogas in cooking
instead
 of LPG will help to save the environment.
For example
,
use
 solar panels to blow bulbs and other electronic equipment in the home.
Furthermore
,
use
wind
energy
 and converted it into electricity to run electric vehicles and
use
 them on large scale. In conclusion, usage of fossil
fuels
 should be reduced
otherwise
, in future, we don't have any fuel to run our cycle.
Therefore
, we need to identify the alternative like solar,
wind
, wave and bioenergy to continue our lives. In my opinion, we need to identify the alternatives to fossil
fuels
 and
use
 renewable
resources
.
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