Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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fact that many

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fall into vicious circles of criminal activity after serving their

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punishment, which

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a hot debate in society.

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, there are some major reasons, resulting in increased criminal activity and the authorities and

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problem immediately to stop

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situations from happening

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issue is that when

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are released into environments, it is more likely they are not treated equally like others, not which could lead to

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sense of isolation between

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and the community.

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, hardly any companies or businesses can recruit people who have a period in prison

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they have a special talent.

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, having a long term in jail associated with the lack of professional skill, it is difficult for them to reintegrate into the community. They will be unemployed,

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why they fall into vicious circles because they cannot earn a living.

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, to stop

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situation in society, the authorities and the

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have to introduce some policies and set stricter rules which not only limits stigma in human beings but

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protect the rights of those underprivileged.

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, the

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creates more opportunities and careers for them to correct their mistakes by operating some vocational training courses,

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, they can acquire knowledge and make a living by themselves. In conclusion, there are many problems that have a huge impact on the community if

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consistently violate and break a law.

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the authorities and

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take into account to resolve

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problem.