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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Undoubtedly, in today's fast-paced era, the trend of immigration has been skyrocketed. The majority of young adults leave their home
country
 while being matured.
This
 phenomenon has its own boons as well as pitfalls. Notwithstanding,
this
 disquisition delves into both outlooks, and
subsequently
 explores why drawbacks supersede the benefits. Apparently, the key plus point of migrating to
foreign
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country
 could be in search of personal development and quality of life. The fact is that many of these youngsters might
born
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 in a populous nation where the resources of education, healthcare and employment are not enough, which is the fundamental requirement of an individual to live a life with fulfilment and
sense
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 of achievement. Sometimes it
also
 could be possible that younglings are extremely intelligent and knowledgeable but are deprived of getting chances to clinch success;
consequently
, immigration happens. Almost one person from one family, for exemplification, migrates to the USA from India, seeking not only individual betterment but
also
 to
fulfill
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 their family's need.
Secondly
, these emigrated youth contribute to
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 countries' tax systems to a certain level, on which the welcoming
country
's economy is dependent to a great level.
Conversely
,
this
 trend
also
 has seen
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 great numbers of drawbacks. The main negative point here might
losing
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such
 an intelligent professional to developed nations, for the sake of lacking opportunities in their mother countries.
This
 is called '
brain-drain'
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brain drain
,
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 when knowledgeable and highly educated people migrate to
developed
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a developed
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country
, and developing nations could face a paucity of educative community. I believe
this
 trend is not beneficial for their birth countries.
Moreover
, at a personal level
also
, many younglings face
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inequality, racial issues, feeling of avoidance from
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 of
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the host
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country
, which is enough to dwindle down a strong person's confidence and dedication. A survey by GNA (Guardian Newspaper of America) stated that, due to cultural differences and racism movements, many people in the USA faced emotional trauma and
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 stress disorders, in
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 10 years.
Thus
, immigration is not always can be advantageous. To conclude, having advanced both standpoints, I recapitulate that there are numerous benefits as well as demerits;
however
, what I feel is disadvantages outweigh advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • migration
  • globalization
  • socio-economic factors
  • traditional norms
  • cosmopolitan environment
  • brain drain
  • assimilation
  • gentrification
  • alienation
  • multiculturalism
  • infrastructure strain
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