Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion, including examples from your knowledge and experience.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have feminine participation in army and police national team or not. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
give my own perspective on the matter. There are people who argue that the benefits of not have only
men
in a country’s security considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that
women
, in general, are so resistant than
men
and they could help them much more than some man who is not motivated for some reason. It is
also
possible to say that we must fight for gender equality in society and believe that everyone is fighting together to protect their nation. One good illustration of
this
is in sports where many
women
are performing well than
men
in activities that are used well-known by
men
’s ability, like soccer.
On the other hand
, others believe that national police and army forces should not allow
women
to participate. It is often argued that they could not be able to improve security. People often have
this
opinion because in many situations
women
do not have the same strength that the opposite sex has due to biological's factors. A
second
point is that many
men
could show a lack of confidence in their feminine partners at
first
and
this
could create a bad relationship between both sex and segregate them.
For example
,
although
the main mission of a police officer should be to protect your colleague, they usually struggle to protect those who treat them well and show confidence in their job. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, I feel that
women
are able to join national’s security.
This
is because they are so smart and brave like
men
and only judge them by sex gender are not the best argument to be against their participation in our protection.
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