1. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries,

students

in the

university

could now be able to select their own

subjects

which resulted in the lacks of

science

knowledge among graduate

students

. In

this

essay, I will be discussing the causes and the effects of it

toward

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society of

this

topical problem. There are several reasons for the changes in the way learners choose their

subjects

.

Firstly

, universities are now focused on developing the student’s future career to

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the unemployment rate of the city.

Secondly

, some foreign

students

find

science

lessons quite difficult for them to follow because different countries have

their

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different ways of teaching

science

.

Thus

, the fail percentage of these lessons often are very high and their

students

could not be able to graduate, so the

university

decided to turn

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into optional

subjects

.

Thirdly

, most learners go to

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university

only to have a better job opportunity when they graduated.

As a result

, they only want to learn

subjects

which will be helpful for their future career.

Moreover

, the lacks of

science

subjects

in the list of compulsory courses had led to some consequences for

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society. The shortage of human resources

such

as professors or researchers in the lab is one of the main reasons which could delay the development of

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society.

Furthermore

, the disappearance of several jobs which require knowledge about physics or chemist

such

as making electronic components could be a huge loss for the community because these jobs are the foundation of other jobs.

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, in my country there are only a few learners

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Physics lessons when they were studying at their

university

so we had to import plenty of electronic parts from other countries. In conclusion, while there are many factors

which

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turned

science

subjects

into an optional choice among

university

students

, it is undeniable that

this

change will make a considerable impact on the community.