In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
It is considered by some employers that new candidates are lacking in collaborative skills. There is no doubt that the education system and training institutes fail to teach team spirit.
However
, it is no matter of concern if team activities included in internships programs then
individuals can learn these skills.Submitted by daisysharma0087 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite