In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of the aging population.

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The advent of technology has changed the life of human beings.
People
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are seen to live more than their expected age.Certainly ,
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the individuals but
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society.
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, there are viable solutions that can help in combating these problems.
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problems and solutions for the given context.
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with, the case of
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living more than expected leads to two major concerns.
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, it will increase the reforms budget of the
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because old
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require more facilities for a comfortable living.The outcome will be
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tax on all
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, if
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birth rate
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is increased and there is no
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decrease in
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rate
then
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the population of a country would increase exponentially and
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will hamper the development of an individual.
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, unemployment can cause an individual to jump into some illegal activities.
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destroying his life. Hopefully, there are two practical solutions for the
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problems.In order to decrease the
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's pressure , contracts related to old-age homes and other welfares should be handed over to NGOs.
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, employment sources should be increased and qualification for applying for any post should be
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generalised
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so that unemployment gets curbed.
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, an electrical graduate should
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be allowed to apply for an Information
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Technology
based post.These measures can surely release the impact
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aged
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the aged
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population. To conclude, if aged
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are
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above the mark,
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government
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the government
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will try to
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increase
the taxes and get money for supporting those old
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issues .
Government
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should take help from NGOs rather than increasing taxes ,whereas, unemployment can be reduced by increasing the work opportunities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • ageing population
  • healthcare system
  • pension costs
  • workforce
  • retirement age
  • isolation
  • mental health
  • intergenerational tension
  • community programs
  • supportive housing
  • inclusive housing
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