All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

In
19th
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century there
are
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is
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limited
use
of
cars
so, burning
fuel
is
also
less. but now a
day
, everyone
want
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there
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their
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own
car
. There are many reasons why they want ? so, usage of
fuel
like petrol, diesel is more and
there
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their
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rate is
also
high in now a
day
. Especially using of fossil fuels environment get harmed.and facing the problem of ozone depletion.
Thats
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That's
That
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the
reason
some
people
say that
,
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due to burning
fuel
which is against environment do not
use
fuel
cars
and because of human convenient
use
electric
cars
replacing
fuel
cars
.
Personally
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i
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agree
to
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the above statement because of using
fuel
car
which
create
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creates
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air, noise
pollution
as well as global warming. Controlling all these things using
electric
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car
is a good option for
people
. Another
reason
is due to
pollution
many
people
have breathing problem. so, taking care of
nature
is
most
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important priority of human being.
To begin
with, due to usage of
fuel
cars
they create air and noise
pollution
and burning
fuel
is another issue.
Moreover
,
every
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one
want
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wants
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their own
car
why ? there are
many
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reason
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reasons
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first
is for personal
convenient
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most of 70-80%
people
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of people
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want their own
car
.
Next
is for happiness mostly youth want their own lavish
car
. In India at every house minimum
one
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car
is available and using more
car
burning of
fuel
is
also
more and because of that parking problem is
create
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.
Firstly
, to control
pollution
people
do the work. Save
nature
is
influence
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an influence
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for all. Too controlling
pollution
plantation of
tree
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the tree
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is required as well as usage of
car
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the car
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limited
for instance
, in
week
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a week
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don’t
use
car
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the car
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for
one
day
and due to
this
car free
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car-free
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day
quite
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pollution
is reduced and using government vehicle for travel is helps towards
country
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the country
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.
Secondly
, someone says ,” you save
nature
,
nature
will save you”.
Its
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most beneficial for health and
well being
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lifestyle. destroying
tree
is
big
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a big
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issue
toward
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next
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generation.
For example
, now in COVID-19
pendamic
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pandemic
situation
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people
are die
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because of less provided oxygen level. The main oxygen source is
tree
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thats
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that's
that
why
cutting
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the cutting
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tree
is very harmful to
human
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a human
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being.
Moreover
, using more
fuel
cars
oxygen level in
air
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the air
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is less and carbon dioxide level is high. If
people
are using
electric
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an electric
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car
it will help towards
maintain
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maintaining
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environment as well as human
well
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good
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health.
Lastly
, in my
opinion
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using
electric
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car
is
best
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the best
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option for controlling
pollution
.
Although
, every human being have authority to save
nature
and
thats
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that
that's
the
reason
in
week
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the week
a week
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they don’t
use
personal vehicle for
one
day
to control and save energy as well as
fuel
.
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  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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