All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Topic Vocabulary:

fossil fuels
emissions
air pollution
greenhouse gases
climate change
sustainable
renewable
electric vehicles
battery technology
charging infrastructure
range anxiety
government support
incentives
subsidies
renewable energy
environmental impact
energy efficiency

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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