All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
In
19th
century there Change the article
the 19th
are
limited Change the verb form
is
use
of cars
so, burning fuel
is also
less. but now a day
, everyone want
Change the verb form
wants
there
own Replace the word
their
car
. There are many reasons why they want ? so, usage of fuel
like petrol, diesel is more and there
rate is Replace the word
their
also
high in now a day
.
Especially using of fossil fuels environment get harmed.and facing the problem of ozone depletion. Thats
the Correct your spelling
That's
That
That is
reason
some people
say that ,
due to burning Remove the comma
apply
fuel
which is against environment do not use
fuel
cars
and because of human convenient use
electric cars
replacing fuel
cars
.
Personally
Add a comma
,Personally
i
agree Change the capitalization
I
to
the above statement because of using Change preposition
with
fuel
car
which create
air, noise Change the verb form
creates
pollution
as well as global warming. Controlling all these things using electric
Add an article
an electric
car
is a good option for people
. Another reason
is due to pollution
many people
have breathing problem. so, taking care of nature
is most
important priority of human being.
Correct article usage
the most
To begin
with, due to usage of fuel
cars
they create air and noise pollution
and burning fuel
is another issue. Moreover
, every
Replace the word
everyone
one
want
their own Change the verb form
wants
car
why ? there are many
Replace the quantifier
much
reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons
first
is for personal convenient
most of 70-80% Replace the word
convenience
people
want their own Change preposition
of people
car
. Next
is for happiness mostly youth want their own lavish car
. In India at every house minimum one
Change preposition
of one
car
is available and using more car
burning of fuel
is also
more and because of that parking problem is create
.
Change the form of the verb
created
Firstly
, to control pollution
people
do the work. Save nature
is influence
for all. Too controlling Add an article
an influence
the influence
pollution
plantation of tree
is required as well as usage of Add an article
the tree
a tree
car
limited Add an article
the car
for instance
, in week
don’t Add an article
a week
the week
use
car
for Add an article
the car
a car
one
day
and due to this
car free
Add a hyphen
car-free
day
quite
Change the article
aquite
pollution
is reduced and using government vehicle for travel is helps towards country
.
Add an article
the country
Secondly
, someone says ,” you save nature
, nature
will save you”. Its
most beneficial for health and Replace the word
It's
It is
well being
lifestyle. destroying Add a hyphen
well-being
tree
is big
issue Correct article usage
a big
toward
Change preposition
for
next
generation.
Correct article usage
the next
For example
, now in COVID-19 pendamic
Correct your spelling
pandemic
situation
Add a comma
,situation
people
are die
because of less provided oxygen level. The main oxygen source is Change the verb form
are dying
tree
Correct article usage
the tree
thats
why Correct your spelling
that's
that
cutting
Add an article
the cutting
a cutting
tree
is very harmful to human
being. Add an article
a human
the human
Moreover
, using more fuel
cars
oxygen level in air
is less and carbon dioxide level is high. If Add an article
the air
people
are using electric
Add an article
an electric
car
it will help towards maintain
environment as well as human Change the verb form
maintaining
well
health.
Change the adverb
good
Lastly
, in my opinion
using Add a comma
,opinion
electric
Add an article
an electric
car
is best
option for controlling Change the article
the best
pollution
. Although
, every human being have authority to save nature
and thats
the Correct your spelling
that
that's
reason
in week
they don’t Add an article
the week
a week
use
personal vehicle for one
day
to control and save energy as well as fuel
.Submitted by padmajakulkarni140 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.