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Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The table illustrates the proportion of expense on three different kinds of consumer goods in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. Overall, all
countries
 spent most on food, drinks, and tobacco in the given period, which was about three times higher than the remaining goods. The least amount of money spent was on leisure and education in all five
countries
. In terms of food, drinks, and tobacco,
people
 in Turkey spent the most at 32.14% on
this
 as opposed to Swedish
people
 at 15.77%, who paid out the least. The expense of Ireland in
this
 category was
also
 high ( 28.19% ) while the
people
 in Italy and Spain consumed 18.80% and 16.36% respectively.
On the other hand
, neither of the
countries
 spent much on leisure and education, which was just under 5%. Turkish
people
 contributed about 4.35 % to
this
 item which is double that in Spain ( 1.98%). Regarding clothing and footwear, the expense of all
countries
 on
this
 item ranged between 5.4% in Sweden and 9% in Italy. The average outgo of remaining
countries
 on
this
 consumer good was around 6% in 2002.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • medical research
  • medications
  • procedures
  • assess
  • safety
  • effectiveness
  • genetic similarities
  • predict
  • ethical considerations
  • morality
  • alternatives
  • pain
  • suffering
  • innovation
  • computer models
  • cell cultures
  • exploit
  • advancements
  • implemented
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