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Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together by making the world smaller. Others disagree, claiming that the internet has made people and communities more isolated because they no longer need to leave home and interact with others. Discuss both views. (No opinion)

#people #internet #world #communities #home
It is often opined that whether
internet
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 is making
people
 closer or making them far away. there are thoughts on both
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sides. I will discuss both the postulates along with my rationale associated with
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appropriate
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people
 are
endulging
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indulging
 more and more in the use of
internet
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. Some
people
 reckon that using social sites like
facebook
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,
instagram
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 and
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
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 making
their
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it
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 life easy to contact
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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 without
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visiting
 their house, which helps them to save their time.
For instance
, as per a survey report conducted by the Times of India, 30% of
people
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agreed
 that using
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
 kind of site they saved
their
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 a lot of time which were wasted in
traveling
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.
Furrthermore
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Furthermore
, utilizing these websites helped them to stay in touch with
them
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those
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 who lived quite far away like overseas or foreign.
Internet
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 proved beneficial to contact with them because it is not a piece of cake to meet them. To illustrate, a
reported
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 published by the
Nationa
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National
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 Airport Authority , stated that they had seen a degrade in the
groth
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growth
 after launching of
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
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 because
people
 prefer to interact
onine
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online
 rather than visit.
on the contrary
, many
people
 think these social media sites are
detreorated
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deteriorated
 the face to face interaction, owing to
this
people
 become less social.
for example
, as per a survey report
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conducted
 by the National Social Authority , 60% of
people
 had avoided social event as they wanted to spent their time on
internet
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.
Additionaly
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Additionally
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, most
people
 opined that
people
 find
friend
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 online
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separate
 them from family and real friends. They isolate themself from everyone and keep
endulging
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indulging
 on
internet
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. Which make a deep
determental
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detrimental
 effect on their mental health. Quintessentially, as per a survey report published by the National Health Organization, 49%
people
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 was suffering
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from
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form
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from
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 perturb and
isolate
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isolation
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 due to a lot of use of
internet
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. To conclude, after perusal of aforementioned point it is conspicuous that
internet
are
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 affecting peoples'
life
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lives
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 on a large scale. It has
became
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 an essential part of everyone's life.
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 of
internet
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 should be regulated
strictely
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strictly
.
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