Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people, while the others are unsure. What is your opinion?

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my hobby is
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fishing
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like fishing very much
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go fishing
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nearly
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every weekend
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have
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three
brothers my three brothers love fishing too we go fishing together we chat about fishing all the time we read lots of fishing magazines we know a lot about fishing we catch
alot
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a lot
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fish
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we usually eat the
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we take them home we cook them at home we serve them to our
families
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families
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like
fish
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families
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think they eat
fish
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too often our
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want
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different to eat sometimes an
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interesting
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was walking along the main road near my house when a car pulled up at the side of me the driver opened the window he said to me
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have seen you on the telly you are Ted Smith
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am not so
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said so he looked disgusted
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and turned
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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