Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be prioritized. Discuss both views and what is your opinion?
Particular members of a society belives that safeguard our
environment
should be the topmost thing that we have to consider. And at the meantime, remaining folk says human requirement should be the top-notch thing over the environmental protection. In this
essay, I would discuss the fundamental human needs and the preservation of the surroundings.
Basic needs for humans are significant to lead a good life. It is one of the important factors to lead a healthy lifestyle. For example
electricity, food and job are the few fundamental needs for humanity to survive in this
world. Basic needs will also
influence the nation's economic growth. Moreover
, we can eradicate the poverty of the country if there is a proper supply of human needs in a community. So, the government should take some measures as well as they have to monitor the needs for the human to lead a better lifestyle.
And then
, protecting the environment
should also
be given equal importance. without the proper surrounding, we can't survive easily in this
world. Because it will cause several health problems in human beings. for instance
, oxygen rate in an environment
is gradually decreasing in following decades so people were suffering to breathe because there is increase content of co2 in air, and then
because of cut down of more tress. To overcome this
situation we have to plant more trees and take care of our environment
properly.
In conclusion, to protect humans from a variety of diseases we should have a proper environment
and to lead a better lifestyle we should focus on human requirements.Submitted by Mohammed abdul
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite