Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as moneymaking attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, people have different views about the amount of

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is spent on attraction places to stimulate travellers that lead to damage to cultural

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.

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, some people believe that

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is solely a method in order to store these

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. It seems to me that the best way to improve attraction places by

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in these days. There are several obvious reasons why people might argue that a great deal of

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is spending a great deal of

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that will impact

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cultural

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justification, uncontrolled mass

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may be damage the natural landscape, which is not able to recover whereby lack of awareness in some of the

visitors

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. Take the example of, “Co Do Hue”

heritage

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is a well-known cultural tradition in Vietnam.

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, the number of

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is creasing dramatically leads to damaging

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place in some the

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who carve their name on the wall as well as they

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wear some garment which not suitable for national tradition. From

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point, it can deteriorate the

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the foreigners.

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, others believe that

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is the best way to upholding of

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.

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is due to the fact that improving attraction

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will arouse huge

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who come to travel in the country. It supports boosting national funds in order to restore and protect the

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. And the economy will increase based on

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field in some countries. Spending amount of

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on the

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that

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draws attention to the holiday-markers who come from the other nation to promote cultural values in our country. To sum up, there are some different aspects between both issues. In my opinion, I am in favour of using moneymaking attractions to

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as the sole way to maintain the traditional

heritage

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.