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Stress is now a major problem in many countries, what are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it ?

#stress #countries #factors #society
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Now adays
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, the responsibilities increased and that
lead
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 to
stress
 in the community. There
is
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 many various reasons for
stress
.
On the other hand
, we can encourage
our self
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 to solve and decrease
stress
.
This
 essay will discuss what I consider to be the two main causes of
stress
,
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 and suggest ways to
manage
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. Indeed,
the
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life
 became demand more work to achieve
safe
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a safe
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 environment
to
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family
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the family
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. But with all these works the
stress
 became one of the most global
issue
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.
However
, the
first
 reason
of
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 the
stress
 is work for late hours. Working for late hours lead to exhausting body and mind.
As a result
for
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 that, the family feels unstable
life
.
Also
, the family problems increase.
Secondly
,
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 children without help probably
makes
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 mothers
in particular
 feel
stress
 because mothers give all the time. Even though they need their own time to be able to give more with love. To decrease
stress
 rate on the community in my opinion. Find free time during the day, to do your hobbies or just for relaxation. So, that would
be restore
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 the body energy. And helps to give more in
the
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life
.
Also
, playing sports every morning source
for
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 positive energy for
whole
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 day.
Finally
, healthy food kind of a good reward for the body after
hard
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 day and that will makes people psychologically satisfied with themselves. s In conclusion, we can not deny
stress
 could lead to
negative
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life
. So, find real solutions help people to be more productive and
more happy
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