Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the rights to choose not to immunise their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In spite of the fact that
parents
can make their decisions in terms of immunising or not immunising their Use synonyms
children
from deadly Use synonyms
diseases
, they have to feel a responsibility to their Use synonyms
children
. From my point of view, it must not be optional and all Use synonyms
children
have to be vaccinated.
We all know that Use synonyms
children
who are less than 6 or 7 age are vulnerable to Use synonyms
diseases
and should have fatal results or big problems in their forthcoming Use synonyms
future
life if they are not protected from heinous Use synonyms
diseases
. Though these childhood illnesses might seem very simple, Use synonyms
parents
must pay attention to their Use synonyms
children
who are at these ages. By the way, it must not be voluntary for Use synonyms
parents
to decide what they must do. It is Use synonyms
also
the Linking Words
future
of the country and the nation in terms of having a strong nation. Namely, Use synonyms
children
comprise the basis of education in the country, so Use synonyms
children
have a bulk and vital role in the country in terms of education and Use synonyms
future
. For Use synonyms
this
reason, governments have to make something special for that, Linking Words
such
as legislations. These sorts of regulations will make Linking Words
parents
feel responsible for their Use synonyms
children
.
Use synonyms
Children
, who suffer from deadly Use synonyms
diseases
and get affected by them in Use synonyms
future
, actually start hating their Use synonyms
parents
. Think about how sad it would be when a child suffers from physical disability only because his Use synonyms
parents
decided not to vaccinate him in his childhood. Use synonyms
That is
something we never want to happen to our nation. Actually, there are Linking Words
also
some families who want to immunise their Linking Words
children
but haven't got sufficient budget to spend for that. In that way, governments have to undertake immunising Use synonyms
such
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children
and assign subsidies for those of Use synonyms
children
. People haven't got the rights not to vaccinate their Use synonyms
children
. Use synonyms
This
is not an option, Linking Words
this
is a must because it is inhumane for both Linking Words
children
and Use synonyms
parents
who might become the victim of deadly Use synonyms
diseases
.
To sum up, Use synonyms
parents
must be responsible for their Use synonyms
children
and they mustn't choose to immunise or not immunise. That should be a must for Use synonyms
parents
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite