Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the rights to choose not to immunise their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In spite of the fact that
parents
can make their decisions in terms of immunising or not immunising their children
from deadly diseases
, they have to feel a responsibility to their children
. From my point of view, it must not be optional and all children
have to be vaccinated.
We all know that children
who are less than 6 or 7 age are vulnerable to diseases
and should have fatal results or big problems in their forthcoming future
life if they are not protected from heinous diseases
. Though these childhood illnesses might seem very simple, parents
must pay attention to their children
who are at these ages. By the way, it must not be voluntary for parents
to decide what they must do. It is also
the future
of the country and the nation in terms of having a strong nation. Namely, children
comprise the basis of education in the country, so children
have a bulk and vital role in the country in terms of education and future
. For this
reason, governments have to make something special for that, such
as legislations. These sorts of regulations will make parents
feel responsible for their children
.
Children
, who suffer from deadly diseases
and get affected by them in future
, actually start hating their parents
. Think about how sad it would be when a child suffers from physical disability only because his parents
decided not to vaccinate him in his childhood. That is
something we never want to happen to our nation. Actually, there are also
some families who want to immunise their children
but haven't got sufficient budget to spend for that. In that way, governments have to undertake immunising such
children
and assign subsidies for those of children
. People haven't got the rights not to vaccinate their children
. This
is not an option, this
is a must because it is inhumane for both children
and parents
who might become the victim of deadly diseases
.
To sum up, parents
must be responsible for their children
and they mustn't choose to immunise or not immunise. That should be a must for parents
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