Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the rights to choose not to immunise their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In spite of the fact that
parents
can make their decisions in terms of immunising or not immunising their
children
from deadly
diseases
, they have to feel a responsibility to their
children
. From my point of view, it must not be optional and all
children
have to be vaccinated.  We all know that
children
who are less than 6 or 7 age are vulnerable to
diseases
and should have fatal results or big problems in their forthcoming
future
life if they are not protected from heinous
diseases
. Though these childhood illnesses might seem very simple,
parents
must pay attention to their
children
who are at these ages. By the way, it must not be voluntary for
parents
to decide what they must do. It is
also
the
future
of the country and the nation in terms of having a strong nation. Namely,
children
comprise the basis of education in the country, so
children
have a bulk and vital role in the country in terms of education and
future
. For
this
reason, governments have to make something special for that,
such
as legislations. These sorts of regulations will make
parents
feel responsible for their
children
.  
Children
, who suffer from deadly
diseases
and get affected by them in
future
, actually start hating their
parents
. Think about how sad it would be when a child suffers from physical disability only because his
parents
decided not to vaccinate him in his childhood.
That is
something we never want to happen to our nation. Actually, there are
also
some families who want to immunise their
children
but haven't got sufficient budget to spend for that. In that way, governments have to undertake immunising
such
children
and assign subsidies for those of
children
. People haven't got the rights not to vaccinate their
children
.
This
is not an option,
this
is a must because it is inhumane for both
children
and
parents
who might become the victim of deadly
diseases
.   To sum up,
parents
must be responsible for their
children
and they mustn't choose to immunise or not immunise. That should be a must for
parents
.
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