Building a Video about my “Personal Effectiveness” development

In conclusion, becoming personal
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is a long journey. In my context, I work in
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IT Company, I manage
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system
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requires a lot of communication. I believe that
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relationships, power & influence is the core framework to develop myself.
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is built by trust and integrity, power and influence are built by the role, knowledge and social. My objectives are to becoming a great leader. It is measured by the projects what I deliver on time, good quality. More important things are
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building up a team with coherent and productive, forming up a wide and quality network.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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