Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social
media
has a significant effect on our personal as well social life, but some argue that
this
impact is mostly malignant.
However
, I disagree with the former statement
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and believe that social
media
plays a positive role because these
platforms
help both the community and individuals to express themselves and solve their problems collectively.
First
of all, social
media
helps
people
represent themselves by sharing the important and memorable moments of their journey with their loved ones, and
people
's friends and family can instantly give reactions
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the photos or videos or
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they upload.
Further
, these
platforms
also
help reduce the distance between relatives who live in foreign countries.
As a result
, social
media
aids in bring
people
together and up to date with each other's lives.
Moreover
, through social
media
platforms
like
Facebook
and
instagram
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one can
also
look for a lost contact.
For example
, I had misplaced
contact
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information of my best friend from school
however
, I searched her on
facebook
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and in a couple of minutes I was able to connect with her.
Secondly
, Twitter,
Facebook
and other
platforms
also
aid in solving various societal problems.
For example
, these days if anything unfair or detrimental has been done to you by anyone or by an institution you can post it on social
media
, and create a cause.
As a result
, you recruit a number of
people
to join your cause
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to eradicate that social problem.
For example
, in a particular
school
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many female students were being harassed by a male teacher. These students took the matter to social
media
and many joined their resolution and petition. As a consequence, of raising their voice the teacher was suspended from the school. In conclusion, some believe that social
media
has a harmful influence on various facets of our life.
However
, I argue that usage of social
media
can
also
lead to various advantages.
For instance
, Twitter,
Facebook
and Instagram
lets
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us share
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significant events of our lives with our loved ones.
Similarly
, these
platforms
also
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us to identify
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and
alleviate societal issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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