Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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has a significant effect on our personal as well social life, but some argue that

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impact is mostly malignant.

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, I disagree with the former statement

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and believe that social

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plays a positive role because these

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help both the community and individuals to express themselves and solve their problems collectively.

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of all, social

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helps

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represent themselves by sharing the important and memorable moments of their journey with their loved ones, and

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's friends and family can instantly give reactions

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the photos or videos or

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they upload.

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, these

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help reduce the distance between relatives who live in foreign countries.

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, social

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aids in bring

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together and up to date with each other's lives.

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, through social

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platforms

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Facebook

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and

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one can

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look for a lost contact.

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, I had misplaced

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information of my best friend from school

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, I searched her on

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facebook

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and in a couple of minutes I was able to connect with her.

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, Twitter,

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and other

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also

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aid in solving various societal problems.

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, these days if anything unfair or detrimental has been done to you by anyone or by an institution you can post it on social

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, and create a cause.

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, you recruit a number of

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to join your cause

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to eradicate that social problem.

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, in a particular

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many female students were being harassed by a male teacher. These students took the matter to social

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and many joined their resolution and petition. As a consequence, of raising their voice the teacher was suspended from the school. In conclusion, some believe that social

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has a harmful influence on various facets of our life.

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, I argue that usage of social

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can

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lead to various advantages.

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, Twitter,

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and Instagram

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us share

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significant events of our lives with our loved ones.

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, these

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enables

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us to identify

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and

alleviate societal issues.

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Topic Vocabulary:

social isolation
virtual interactions
mental health
feelings of inadequacy
anxiety
depression
misinformation
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privacy concerns
data breaches
productivity
foster connections
educational content
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