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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime drama are becoming more and more popular. why do You think this? what is Your opinion of crime fiction and crime dramas

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In the contemporary scenario, there has been an increasing popularity for
crime
 stories in the form of books or cinematic drama in various nations. Many reasons could surface for the same. My inclination to
such
 a trend along with the causes of increased popularity will be discussed in the following writeup. There are a plethora of reasons that caused immense trends.
Firstly
, the adrenaline rush that comes with the
crime
 genre. The scandal stories contain a high amount of suspense and plot twists, which play a major role in
interest
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 the audience due to the experience of thrill they find.
For instance
, the novel 'The Girl on the Train' gained immense applause for its out of the box storyline that it was adapted into a film.
Moreover
, it
also
 enables the audience to become more aware if a similar situation may occur in real life.
Thus
, the people learn not only about the crimes
,
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 but
also
 how to deal
and
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 avoid
such
 scenarios.
For example
, the Indian teleshow
Crime
 Patrol telecasts various wrongdoings and how the culprits are punished.
This
 creates knowledge and awareness among the public. Elaborating my opinion towards the popularity, I believe it has more detrimental effects.
This
 is because it may plant evil ideas in the minds of the people, particularly the young minds which may lead to serious criminal offences.
Also
, watching or reading too many
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crime
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 genres, induces violence and feeling of anger within oneself.
Therefore
, one should have a limit for the same.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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