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The diagram shows below the process of obtaining
ethanol
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 from corn. So, it is quite sophisticated work, where the initial product needs to pass through several stages. These are divided into separate boxes, including in each the general information about actions. Before, the corn is deposited and
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 milling it is necessary to add water, offer ward all together to cook for 4
hours
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. It is important to mention that
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 process is followed by 48
hours
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 of fermenting. In
fact
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 we can see that the most important step of
the
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forming the
ethanol
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 is related to
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 paragraph
,
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 because the essential product is done, what it will need to do
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 is separating and purifying the
ethanol
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. As I mentioned, the
next
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 thing it needs to do is separating the gained liquid and solid by-product,
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 leave the
ethanol
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 for 5
hours
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 time to purify. The
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 moment is to storing and transporting the
ethanol
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 produced from corn. In ,Conclusion the process takes about 57
hours
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 of work with good result.
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