You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter: 1. Thank your friend for the holiday 2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house 3. Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Hello Mick, I’m writing to thank you for the wonderful holidays we had spent together with your family members. It’s been a fantastic week I had enjoyed thoroughly in my lifetime. A special thanks to your mom and dad for extending their support to me. I missed my wallet in your home, and I realized it when I got back home. I do not know the exact place where I left it.

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, I want you to check in the room where I stayed. You could check in the ward roof and the other two drawers. If you cannot find it, the other possibility is to search your travel back’s front zip. The reason is, hope you remember I used your back bag when we were doing trekking.

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you could in any one of the places. I want you to keep it with you and deliver it to one of my friends who is travelling to your locality for a short trip

week. I have informed him to collect it from you and I have given

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contact details. Along with

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letter, I have attached his photo and phone number for reference. Thank you for the vacation and meet you soon. Your friend, Vijay

Submitted by Vijay Pandurangan on Tue Jun 29 2021

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

207 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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