In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water caused by both industry and construction. What are some of these problems? And what solutions could be provided to prevent this?

Water

and

Air

are all important parts of our life, we can’t live without

water

and

air

. As though resources are polluted by various types of manufacturing and construction, it has a strong negatives effect on

people

's life.

This

essay will discuss some of the major issues and how to make them become better.

To begin

with, in terms of

water

pollution

, the main

problem

that causes

water

pollution

is that industrials waste was dumped into the

water

. Because the contaminated

water

can include lots of chemical substances and bacteria which can directly ruin our living environment and cause health hazards

such

as cancer, respiratory diseases, etc.

For instance

, Ha

Noi

is one of the most developed cities in Viet Nam where you can see so many buildings with lots of

factories

near urban. And To Lich River is a great example of

water

pollution

. The river is surrounded by To Lich

people

’s houses and right

next

to the industrial zone. The life of

people

in that

place

is hard and inconvenient because of the bad smells and the black

water

. The health of

people

in that

place

usually in danger and always need support from the government more than in other places. To solve these problems government should seek to refresh the

place

and

use

the technology to take out the mud and industry’s oil under the

water

place

due to the fact that there so many contaminates, and chemicals substances were oozed from near

factories

, and

also

, they need to replace the manufacturing zone immediately because

this

can be the most useful solution for keeping the

water

resources clean.

Secondly

, about the

air

pollution

, the significant

problem

is a large amount of gas and fume are produced by

factories

and transportations. The factory is the popular

problem

which causes lots of

pollution

but when it’s come to vehicles, they

use

the petrol to run so because of that there too much dust around us, even if I go out for a while

then

I come back home, I can see my T-shirt totally changed the

color

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. Let’s take Ha

Noi

for example

again, with a lot of high buildings and Industries, Ha

Noi

can have both kinds of

pollution

water

can

air

. But

air

pollution

is the greatest damage to

people

living here.

Last

year, we were announced that the

air

density in Ha

Noi

was now up to a dangerous level. That’s means we can easily to respiratory diseases when breathing in the

air

. We can tackle

this

problem

by using electronic transportations

instead

of petrol ones because it is not going to make dust and create a positive effect on our atmosphere.

Moreover

, the

factories

which still need to

use

coal to produce one more time need to replace, but with the manufacture can

also

use

the electronic, manufacture using technology is not only protect our living environment but

also

boost the working productivity. In conclusion,

air

and

water

pollution

are now at an alarming rate and it causes so many diseases and destroys the environment. It makes

people

feel sick and tired of it. But nowadays, we have already found out solutions for those issues. And in my essay, I have chosen to

use

electronics

instead

of petrol or gas.

Furthermore

, in my opinion,

use

technology is an effective way to overcome

these

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pollutions. What about you? How do you think?