In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water caused by both industry and construction. What are some of these problems? And what solutions could be provided to prevent this?

Water

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and

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are all important parts of our life, we can’t live without

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and

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. As though resources are polluted by various types of manufacturing and construction, it has a strong negatives effect on

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's life.

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essay will discuss some of the major issues and how to make them become better.

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with, in terms of

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pollution

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, the main

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that causes

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pollution

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is that industrials waste was dumped into the

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. Because the contaminated

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can include lots of chemical substances and bacteria which can directly ruin our living environment and cause health hazards

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as cancer, respiratory diseases, etc.

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, Ha

Noi

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is one of the most developed cities in Viet Nam where you can see so many buildings with lots of

factories

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near urban. And To Lich River is a great example of

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pollution

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. The river is surrounded by To Lich

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’s houses and right

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to the industrial zone. The life of

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in that

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is hard and inconvenient because of the bad smells and the black

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. The health of

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in that

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usually in danger and always need support from the government more than in other places. To solve these problems government should seek to refresh the

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and

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the technology to take out the mud and industry’s oil under the

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place

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due to the fact that there so many contaminates, and chemicals substances were oozed from near

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, and

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, they need to replace the manufacturing zone immediately because

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can be the most useful solution for keeping the

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resources clean.

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, about the

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pollution

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, the significant

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is a large amount of gas and fume are produced by

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and transportations. The factory is the popular

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which causes lots of

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but when it’s come to vehicles, they

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the petrol to run so because of that there too much dust around us, even if I go out for a while

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I come back home, I can see my T-shirt totally changed the

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. Let’s take Ha

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for example

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again, with a lot of high buildings and Industries, Ha

Noi

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can have both kinds of

pollution

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water

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can

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. But

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pollution

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is the greatest damage to

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living here.

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year, we were announced that the

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density in Ha

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was now up to a dangerous level. That’s means we can easily to respiratory diseases when breathing in the

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. We can tackle

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problem

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by using electronic transportations

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of petrol ones because it is not going to make dust and create a positive effect on our atmosphere.

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, the

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which still need to

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coal to produce one more time need to replace, but with the manufacture can

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use

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the electronic, manufacture using technology is not only protect our living environment but

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boost the working productivity. In conclusion,

air

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and

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pollution

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are now at an alarming rate and it causes so many diseases and destroys the environment. It makes

people

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feel sick and tired of it. But nowadays, we have already found out solutions for those issues. And in my essay, I have chosen to

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electronics

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of petrol or gas.

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, in my opinion,

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technology is an effective way to overcome

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pollutions. What about you? How do you think?