Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

In today’s world due to the advent of technology, ways of communication have been changed massively. People can easily find more friends and communicate

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each other much

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faster than past.

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many individuals can benefit from current ways of conversation and

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, I believe that there are several negative aspects of them. Nowadays,

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many of us have a wide range of technological methods in order to connect to each other.

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, due to the pandemic of smartphones and

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we can find friends widely ,which get chance to s to make different relationships as we want.

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, social media can show us our society much

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faster than past. It means that

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whenever we publish a photo of ourselves It can seem by a huge amount of people just by a mobile phone. But are these

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negative or positive

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? Many companies and vast array o businesses are totally dependent on online communication.

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communicate in

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way can bring income and interaction, I believe that it can lead us to a cold environment due to the lack of less direct emotions. It means that whenever we want to chat with our families

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friends by text message, there is no sign of facial and emotional attractions. Under

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,circumstances we can't imagine each other perfectly ,which can have dire consequences on our feeling and make us cold. In conclusion,

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the development of technological devices, many people make relationships much faster and wider than

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it isn't a positive trend.