In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their product are new in some way, Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Endorsing a product through

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is not new to mankind. Nowadays,

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, an increasing number of

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are advertising their

products

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by claiming that they are novel as

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to the others. In

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essay, I will discuss the reason behind

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and will explain that despite recognising the fact that these marketing tactics are fruitful, I feel that

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is not a positive development.

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with, growing competition, among similar

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businesses

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, is one of the major reasons behind the way advertising is being done these days. Unfortunately,

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is the reality of the modern world that due to the increasing number of competitors,

products

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are becoming

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now quicker than ever, which urges the owners to keep introducing new features

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and advertise them in order to attract more buyers. Mobile phone companies,

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, are the biggest rivals from the

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two decades, who are always looking to make their

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and

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as innovative as possible. One of the mobile-tech companies "Apple", recently launched a

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camera to their

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iPhone

, which apparently of not

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particular use.

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, just by making the appearance more interesting, and spending $50 million dollars on its marketing,

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overall revenue has been increased

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up to

one

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hundred

billion dollars. Henceforth, it is an undeniable fact that novelty

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always attracts more customers.

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, small

businesses

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with

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quality

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products

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are affecting in a

horrendious

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horrendous

way. Those, who can't spend a handsome amount of money, are unable to secure any profit,

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laest

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latest

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products

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are able to

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, because of the "False-

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". Kylie Jenner a giant of

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the make-up

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industry,

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, spent a mouth dropping amount of money on the launch of her average

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skin care

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brand, while several superior

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small brands can't even dream of having

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huge

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customer base; due to the lack of budget for marketing. These

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advertisements

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are making it so hard for small business owners to keep up with their sales. In conclusion, where

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in competition is forcing companies to add novelty to their

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and

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approach is

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giving birth to the term "False-

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", which is ultimately harming the growth of small

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