Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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educational institutions main role is to develop

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of society and

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, rather than focusing on the development of a students' individual qualities. The paragraphs below will outline a strong agreement about

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with, I believe schools must display an important part in teaching young people about citizenship. The reason for

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is because morality and honesty, which are collective characteristics essential to maintain a good

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among others, are learned from the very

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being effective. Through acquiring knowledge about these social manners, children may

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respectfully and well-mannered.

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, active teaching strategies can be used to show to expose how to be a model citizen properly.

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, in Brazilian schools, primary-aged students are introduced to voting and policies' seminars, to develop citizen conscience.

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, I consider that the subjects taught are

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to prepare the students

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market in the future. Several companies nowadays demand hard-skilled individuals

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certain jobs.

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, during an interview to be system manager of a company, the tiebreaker point to choose between me and other

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was a math problem.

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, learning topics in mathematics,

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or history may augment the possibilities of being hired in adulthood. To conclude, I strongly agree that the main purpose of educational institutions are and should be transmitting about citizenship and work effort to keep building a moral and honest society, and to increase chances of fulfilling a career in the coming years.