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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Music
 nowadays has turned to be an activity by which many of us relax. Many feel so much relaxed by listening to
music
 and while others find themselves more comfortable with playing musical instruments more often.
Sometime
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 many songs are used to cheer up mood and state of mind.
This
 will give internal peace and its help to forget all tensions.
Firstly
, the universe is divided into many different cultures and traditions. Every part of the world has its own unique identity. Different
people
 have their own likes and dislikes.
Similarly
, when we talk about
music
, it
also
 differs from region to region. While subcontinent
people
 are more attracted towards classical and folk which is often
a slow rhythmic
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slow rhythmic music
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music
 and
people
 of western
people
 like
the
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fast track
music
 because classical
music
 is the part of the culture of the subcontinent and mostly on different occasions and events
people
 prefer jazz and their folk
music
.
Secondly
, as the world is forwarding fast day-by-day and
advancement
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 are taking place in every field, the same is true for
the
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music
. In
music
 nowadays there are different software like android apps are introduced which are
also
 helpful for listeners I personally believe that someone put more attention and show a high level of interest when
music
 is directly related to their tradition and culture. Especially in our subcontinent,
people
 are attracted towards traditional songs as compared to international or foreign
music
 and
coumnity
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community
 give more importance to their traditions because tradition is something which makes you proud or we can say that it’s your identity.
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