Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a drastic change in each and every field due to rapid advancement in
technology
. Some
technology
is difficult to
undestand
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understand
or it takes
time
to learn that
technolgy
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technology
but it does not mean
than
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that
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it increases
the
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life
dificulties
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difficulties
.
Nowdays
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, if you
not
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do not
did not
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follow the trend of
technology
than
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then
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you would make your
life
complex rather than using it. So, I surely believe
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that use of
technology
will ease the pressure of
life
living and my essay will give some examples of it.
Technology
gave us more
time
to live in
this
world and to enhance the beauty of
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nature. If we are using the fast car to reach
the
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another destination is
good
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way to reduce
time
and
this
only happens if we use new cars which
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been made by new
techology
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technology
. Another good
exaple
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example
of how technical things that
has
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have
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been
inveted
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invited
invented
invested
by our
scientis
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scientist
. People who
lives
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live
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in the
fifteen floor
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building and he does not want to go through
lift
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life
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as he thinks that technical
thihngs
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things
will not
benifited
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benefited
him than he would
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his precious
time
and
also
have some more physical load in his body
conversaly
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conversely
if he would use elevator than both
time
and health would be saved. If we
not adopted
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the
technolgy
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technology
than
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then
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people would be not able to get fast
transaction
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transactions
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of banks.
For instance
, as of now
india
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India
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has announced new
technology
which has been named as
fasttrack
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fast track
FastTrack
, which means you not need to wait in the
queaes
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queues
queue
as
this
fastrack
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Fastrack
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is linked to the individual person bank, and when he or she
go
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goes
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through
higway
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highway
toll-tax than he or she does not need to stop there they just have to pass and money automatically debited from
account
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the account
an account
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which will reduce
trffic
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traffic
at toll-taxes. In conclusion,
technolgy
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technology
made our
life
more
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easier than before.
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