Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a drastic change in each and every field due to rapid advancement in

technology

. Some

technology

is difficult to

undestand

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understand

or it takes

time

to learn that

technolgy

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technology

but it does not mean

than

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that

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it increases

the

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life

dificulties

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difficulties

Nowdays

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Nowadays

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, if you

not

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do not

did not

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follow the trend of

technology

than

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then

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you would make your

life

complex rather than using it. So, I surely believe

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that use of

technology

will ease the pressure of

life

living and my essay will give some examples of it.

Technology

gave us more

time

to live in

this

world and to enhance the beauty of

the

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nature. If we are using the fast car to reach

the

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another destination is

good

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a good

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way to reduce

time

and

this

only happens if we use new cars which

has

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been made by new

techology

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technology

. Another good

exaple

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example

of how technical things that

has

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been

inveted

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invited

invented

invested

by our

scientis

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scientist

. People who

lives

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in the

fifteen floor

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building and he does not want to go through

lift

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life

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as he thinks that technical

thihngs

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things

will not

benifited

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benefited

him than he would

loss

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his precious

time

and

also

have some more physical load in his body

conversaly

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conversely

if he would use elevator than both

time

and health would be saved. If we

not adopted

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did not adopt

have not adopted

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the

technolgy

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technology

than

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people would be not able to get fast

transaction

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of banks.

For instance

, as of now

india

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has announced new

technology

which has been named as

fasttrack

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fast track

FastTrack

, which means you not need to wait in the

queaes

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queues

queue

this

fastrack

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is linked to the individual person bank, and when he or she

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goes

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through

higway

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highway

toll-tax than he or she does not need to stop there they just have to pass and money automatically debited from

account

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the account

an account

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which will reduce

trffic

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traffic

at toll-taxes. In conclusion,

technolgy

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technology

made our

life

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easier than before.

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