Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity . some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art
is the externalization of the skills of an
artist
. And in Indian culture
art
has
top
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priority. Because everyone loves to
art
worked statue, artwork saree, toys, paintings etc.
artist
are
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free of
time
but, some people claim that they have total liberty to develop their skill.
To begin
with,
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the creator
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creator
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have
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their full
time
to create and invent their ideas is whole depend upon their priority as well as interest.
Moreover
, their
work
is in their field so, they
use
their full
time
to make
different
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type
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types
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of
creation
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creations
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. If
artist
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the artist
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is very passionate about their
art
then
he has 24 hours
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in his hand.
For instance
, at the
time
of
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the lord
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Ganpati festival,
artist
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artists
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design different
type
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types
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of beautiful lord
ganesha
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Ganesha
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statue
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. They
use
their total
time
in
work
because that
time
they are interested.
Secondly
, for help to
artist
government should try.
Although
they form new
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policies
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only for
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the artist
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artist
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artists
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to motivate them towards their craft.
On the other hand
, government forward some monthly charge to an
artist
account which
help
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him financially.
For example
, if
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the administration
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arrange
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arranges
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exhibition
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an exhibition
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for
designer
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the designer
a designer
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and given
reward
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as
a
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outstanding
art
,
then
, it
encourage
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artist
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the artist
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for their skull.
Thirdly
, due to rewarding
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artists
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artist
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they have a competition between them for creating new things.
Equally
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they are trying to
use
their full
time
to invent
such
a different and unique
art
like
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a statue
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statue
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statues
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, designer saree, paintings etc.
their
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they're
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by heart 100
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seen in their
art
.
For example
, Aishwarya Rais saree which seen a good designer look.
For example
, The Mona Lisa is a half-length portrait painting by Italian
artist
Leonardo da Vinci. Considered an archetypal masterpiece of the Italian Renaissance, it has been described as "the best known, the most visited, the most written about, the most sung about, the most parodied
work
of
art
in the world"
Lastly
, I conclude that
,
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being an
artist
has so many skills in their mind.
Moreover
, they try to present in front of people via exhibitions. And if they are passionate
then
they
use
their valuable
time
towards their
work
.
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  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
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  • societal morals
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