Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity . some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art
is the externalization of the skills of an artist
. And in Indian culture art
has top
priority. Because everyone loves to Correct article usage
a top
art
worked statue, artwork saree, toys, paintings etc. artist
are
free of Change the verb form
is
time
but, some people claim that they have total liberty to develop their skill.
To begin
with, Add an article
the creator
creator
Fix the agreement mistake
creators
have
their full Change the verb form
has
time
to create and invent their ideas is whole depend upon their priority as well as interest. Moreover
, their work
is in their field so, they use
their full time
to make different
Add an article
a different
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
creation
. If Fix the agreement mistake
creations
artist
is very passionate about their Add an article
the artist
an artist
art
then
he has 24 hours time
in his hand. Change preposition
of time
For instance
, at the time
of lord
Ganpati festival, Correct article usage
the lord
artist
design different Fix the agreement mistake
artists
type
of beautiful lord Fix the agreement mistake
types
ganesha
Change the capitalization
Ganesha
statue
. They Fix the agreement mistake
statues
use
their total time
in work
because that time
they are interested.
Secondly
, for help to artist
government should try. Although
they form new policy
only for Fix the agreement mistake
policies
Add an article
the artist
artist
to motivate them towards their craft. Fix the agreement mistake
artists
On the other hand
, government forward some monthly charge to an artist
account which help
him financially. Change the verb form
helps
For example
, if administration
Correct article usage
the administration
arrange
Change the verb form
arranges
exhibition
for Add an article
an exhibition
designer
and given Add an article
the designer
a designer
reward
as Correct article usage
a reward
a
outstanding Change the article
an
art
, then
, it encourage
Change the verb form
encourages
artist
for their skull.
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the artist
Thirdly
, due to rewarding Fix the agreement mistake
artists
artist
they have a competition between them for creating new things. Add a comma
,artist
Equally
they are trying to Add a comma
,Equally
use
their full time
to invent such
a different and unique art
like Add an article
a statue
statue
, designer saree, paintings etc. Fix the agreement mistake
statues
their
by heart 100 Replace the word
they're
they are
percent
seen in their Change the spelling
per cent
art
. For example
, Aishwarya Rais saree which seen a good designer look.
For example
, The Mona Lisa is a half-length portrait painting by Italian artist
Leonardo da Vinci. Considered an archetypal masterpiece of the Italian Renaissance, it has been described as "the best known, the most visited, the most written about, the most sung about, the most parodied work
of art
in the world"
Lastly
, I conclude that,
being an Remove the comma
apply
artist
has so many skills in their mind. Moreover
, they try to present in front of people via exhibitions. And if they are passionate then
they use
their valuable time
towards their work
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