Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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The two drawings illustrate the changes of the Southwest

airport

before and after the redevelopment of

gates

and facilities. It is clear that there are significant changes after

this

construction. Not only more

gates

are increased , but

also

a number of facilities are built in the

airport

. The new

airport

has become a middle scale one

instead

of a small

airport

. Before redevelopment, there are two entrances respectively for the usage of departure and arrival in the

airport

. Due to the size extension and the footprint

increasement

Correct your spelling

increment

, the entrances rise to four and remain at

the

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their

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original positions.

Furthermore

although

the lobbies are kept for the same space

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the current ones, adding some new facilities

such

as bag drop, cafe, ATM, car hire are designed in the front part of the halls.

Also

, shops are located in between security

check

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checks

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and

gates

However

, the layout changes fairly large after the building is extended in the areas of

gates

. The number of

gates

is increased from eight to eighteen, with a sky train linked to the nearest

gates

to far-away ones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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182 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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