The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

Since the late 20th century, animal rights has become the topic of argument. Artificial settings have been proven to be beneficial to these vertebrates, and as

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I am of the opinion that it should not be prohibited,

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is because zoos help to prevent the extinction of these species and

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generate income for the host country.

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, zoos are

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created for the sole purpose of decreasing the rate by which some species of animals go into exile, secondary to man's activity.

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, due to the high level of hunting for elephants in Kenya,

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amount

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of funds are

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by their government for the construction of artificial

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, in a bid to prevent the extinction of Elephants from Kenya. I am of the

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that these man-made habitats should not be banned as they can serve as

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of revenue to a nation. By creating these settings, people from different walks of life can pay just to visit these animals whose species are been

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to go into exile. By so doing,

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indirectly generates funds for the government. In Dubai

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, one of the major

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of income is

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which serves as

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attraction, individuals pay handsomely to

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watch lions and take pictures with them. In conclusion,

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animal rights

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been a subject of discussion for decades, creating a man-made environment for them has been shown to help them from going into exile. I do not agree that it should be banned as

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can serve as a nation's source of wealth.