People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Many are becoming dependent on the internet and mobile device. These have pros as well as cons. the fact that it enables individuals

connect

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with like-minded people and

also

enable them

shop

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from the comfort of their homes is stronger than the fact that it can disconnect these

persons

destroy social interaction. On the one hand , the use of telephones

have

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been proven to

threathen

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threaten

face-to-face interaction.

This

is because

with

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the

use

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phone

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of phone

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and the availability of

cellular

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the cellular

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network

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networks

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to surf the internet, many

persons

can spend the whole day online without having any discussion with those in their immediate environment.

For example

, the result of a study performed by a prof of sociology at the college university,

Lagod

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Lagos

showed that the proportion of face-to-face discussion dropped by about 30 per cent following the invention of

cellular

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the cellular

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device

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devices

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and the internet.

On the other hand

, the use of mobile devices and cellular data has

also

been shown to make

live

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easier especially for

working class

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individuals.

That is

to say that people who do not have enough time to go to the market can buy what he needs from an online store and their goods will be delivered to his

door post

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. In the USA

for instance

, a good percentage of

persons

buy different items online due to their tight

schedule

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.

Also

, individuals dependency on mobile data is on the rise as

this

can help them connect with

persons

with

same

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interest

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interests

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across the globe. Websites

such

as

facebook

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Facebook

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,

twitter

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Twitter

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,

linkedIn

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LinkedIn

Linkedin

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etc help many connect with others of

same

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the same

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interest. To illustrate, LinkedIn is a social media platform that

allow

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allows

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scholars to discuss trending issues. In conclusion,

although

dissociating many from their immediate surroundings is one of the drawbacks worthy of note as they become dependent on it, the fact that these gadgets increases one's social horizon beyond their immediate environment and

also

make shopping easier outweighs it.