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In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this because women can earn their income and therefore not require financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

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We are living in a world, where everyone is financially independent and can do or achieve anything they want. In some countries,
Women
 choose to not getting married because they have enough money in their bank account that they don't want men in their
life
. Well, I personally believe that everyone has a right to choose whatever they want to do in their
life
, so I strongly agree with their decision. I am going to explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
First
 of all, it helps them to feel secure and safe whenever they are alone especially from abusive partners. Most of the
women
 don't want to get married because they don't want someone in their
life
 who not only abuse them but took their income and use it for its own purpose. According to the
Women
 right centre's survey 43 per cent out of 100 per cent who face domestic violence in their house or outside on a daily basis most of them either die or try suicide because of the abuse that they have to face every day. So, I think it's not a bad idea to take control of its self-own
life
.
Secondly
, they can prioritize their goals or whatever they want to do with their
life
. Most of the
women
, like to open their own business or even want to get a job where they can make enough money for their future. It helps them to gain confidence and most importantly happiness. Some of the role models, who achieved their ambitions
such
 as Michelle Obama, Malala zusafzai and Opera Winfrey agrees that independent
women
 are the future of tomorrow. Even if we see, some successful companies
such
 as Persico, Vogue and Tv channels
such
 as ESPN and TLC their CEO's are
women
 and some of them are not even married. I personally think that, if a man has a choice to not getting married and can do anything with their
life
then
 why not
women
. They can achieve more than what our society can expect from them. They can become Prime Ministers, Engineers, Doctors and so on. Let give them, the chance so that they can show us their talent and dedication.
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