Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays ,
energy
saving is
in
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trending. because thermodynamics
first
law state that, “
energy
neither be created nor be destroy”.
Although
the main natural source of
energy
is
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sunlight
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sun light
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sunlight
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. So, solar
energy
is from
sun
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and converted into thermal or electrical
energy
. Due to these
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reasons
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reason
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energy
from
sun
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the sun
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is more famous than household
energy
.
To begin
with, there are many advantages
for
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using
solar
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the solar
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panel
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panels
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at home as well as
in
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on
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farm
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or any other
places
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place
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. Equally, solar is
clean
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a clean
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, renewable source of
energy
that can help reduce carbon dioxide emission and lower our impact on the natural environment.
For instance
, solar system power
plant
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plants
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do not reduce air pollution and
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greenhouse
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green house
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gases.
Secondly
, the
next
advantage of
solar
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the solar
a solar
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panel
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panels
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is
it
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they
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reduce
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electricity bills.
For
example
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if
solar
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the solar
a solar
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panel
is situated
in
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in-home
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home
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a home
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or farm it helps to generate electricity.
Moreover
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at
home
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it is useful for hot water and because of using it electricity bill
also
less as compares to other gas cylinder or heater.
Thirdly
, there are many disadvantages
also
. In that solar
panel
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panels
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take more space, its storage is expensive as well as the main it is weather dependent.
For example
, in
rainy
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the rainy
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season
sun
is absent
at
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that situation solar can not form hot water.
Lastly
, in my opinion, “every coin has two
side
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” that’s why
solar
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panel
has some good and bad effect but, it has many benefits which are
use
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in our daily life.
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