Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Airways

are the modern form of transport for

people

to move from one place to another as it reduces time, money and energy. Certain

people

argue that

airways

are causing more air

pollution

than ever before but I strongly disagree

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this

statement and in

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essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

Firstly

airways

are not

the

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just the predominant cause of air

pollution

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, think of

this

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way, if

people

were forced to use roadways for moving thousands of miles

then

imagine the cost of fuel and time wasted towards that.

Also

, imposing

tax

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would lead to the usage of

airways

only by elite

people

which would not be a great idea.

Moreover

, increasing

tax

would put

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significant stress on

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tourism as

people

would prefer

toruing

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touring

with other means of transport. Another reason why I disagree is

because

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, if

pollution

is the problem, we need to resort to

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a way

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way

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in which we could curb the

pollution

instead

of imposing

tax

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a tax

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on airfare.

For instance

government

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the government

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should invest more into the research of biofuel or electric fuel which would actually save the environment as well as the time and energy of the

people

Finally

, the modern style of transport is causing some environmental problems but the solution would be to find an alternative way to overcome the issue with advanced technology and solutions. Raising

tax

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the tax

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would eventually put a hole in common man's pocket and will put the country

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back

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foot rather than developing

further

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Fully explain your ideas

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