In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night until they are accompanied by an adult while others believe that teenagers should be given the freedom to move. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

preventing teenagers from going outside after a specific time at night if they are not escorted by a grown-up is applied in some regions of the US. Personally, I strongly agree with

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essay will discuss my point of view. In the beginning, I think it is a brilliant idea to impose a curfew on

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situation since it will be a kind of support for

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who are struggled to make full control of their

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during

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complicated phase; I mean a

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stage. Really, it is the most exhausting stage for

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, since their

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tend to break up all their rules and their boundaries. Most teenagers,

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, refuse anything that their

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ask them to do in order to prove themselves.

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, it is much more beneficial for

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and the government to work as a unit,

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of leaving the

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to encounter their

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's difficulties alone.

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,

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restriction will limit the harmful impacts yield from leaving the

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outside their home alone for a late time, which leads to unresponsible behaviours,sometimes.

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, they may tend to go to unsafe places

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and make themselves vulnerable to the risk from dangerous people.

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, they may get used to take illegal drugs or get engaged in criminal damage. really,

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believe that

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decision will have a vast benefit for

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and the government itself. to conclude, forcing the

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to stay at home after a particular time at night is the right decision. and will support the

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to avoid different kinds of challenges with their

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,

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in general, it will decline the number of crimes in the community and help the

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to exceed

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stage safely and without harming their selves or harming others.