In many countries, the level of crimes is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ?

Worldwide the frequency of

crimes

is increasing,

likewise

its dangerousness. Underdeveloped countries might suffer more from

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fact

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because they lack important institutions and infrastructure systems

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are fundamental to solve

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unfortunate matter. In

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essay, I will explain some reasons behind

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issue and provide solutions to tackle

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problem.

To begin

with,

crimes

are becoming more frequent due to poor educational institutions in several nations, especially poor ones. Schools play an important role in regards

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basic education, to explain, it is there where youngers learn how to be altruist, to respect other colleagues and not to be negligent. If

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place poorly teaches these principles as it is seen in underdeveloped countries, the tendency for human beings

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crime

is enormous. Alongside these weak principle’s development, more hazard

crimes

are being committed because punishments are too weak. The punishment system alleviates the deserved penalty and

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not play its main role

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what is right.

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, to tackle these issues, it is highly important to have outstanding schools where can help

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people

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an early age. Teachers from these institutions might note small behaviours which are important to be corrected once they act. To illustrate, if a student shows

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tendency, even if it is taking a single pencil without asking, the teacher may reprehend and rapidly interfere before

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Furthermore

, punishments need to be

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the same level as the derived

crime

.

In other words

, the lack of severe measures to criminality may give criminals the opportunity to repeat or even worsen their

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. In conclusion, both facts run altogether, unfortunately, the type of

crime

also

evolve as well as its frequency.

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this

tendency, schools need to teach great values to children to contain initial behaviours once they are still young.

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system in each nation must apply severe consequences to those who commit

crimes

to avoid its repetition. In