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In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Even though farming has been modernized,a lot of individuals all over
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 are still experiencing hunger.The following paragraphs would discuss
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the causes for
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 to overcome
this
 situation. There are two notable reasons for starvation among the
people
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Firstly
, as farmers are introducing new methods in agriculture which needs a huge investment, they are raising the prices of their
yeilds
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yields
years
builds
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Therefore
, many
people
 who cannot afford that much amount of money are struggling to eat
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at least
 once
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a day.
Besides
this
, another concern is the population increase.The amount of land for cultivation is staying
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 ,whereas,
population
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 has been increasing exponentially.
Hence
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shortage
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 of food comes into the picture. Positively, by implementing certain solutions ,
people
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being hungry. One recommendation is that the Government should consider providing food via
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welfare schemes.
This
 way they can lend a hand to the poor and see that they do not die of hunger.
Moreover
,individuals should stop housing construction on fertile lands and
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shoud
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should
 see that these lands are allocated to farmers for harvesting more crops.
As a result
 ,crop production increases and
every one
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 gets food to eat. In a nutshell,
although
 technology has touched farming, it is true that large amounts of
people
 are
straving
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starving
striving
 in and around the nations.The causes being
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 in the price of
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eatables and
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birth rate .
However
, by inculcating some measures all the individuals can be
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needed
feeded
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fed
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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