Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.

The biggest difference in past and present is nowadays
children
become more stubborn and rube than before. One of the
reason
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is negligence and not get
proper
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upbringing. In
this
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we discussed what
are
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the reason and how to solve
this problems
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.
Firstly
, In
this
modern world
parents
are working. They don't have
time
for their
children
so often
children
feel alone and
negligented
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negligent
negligence
as a result
, they spend their leisure
time
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internet and watching web series , movies, show . Generally,
juvenile
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love to watch crime series and
they
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influence with the bad things
for instance
,
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if
child
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likes negative role in
movie
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a movie
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he tries to copy his attitude because no one
correct
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them, they think is good and
also
peer pressure help
incresing
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increasing
this things
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.
however
, It will be solved if
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children
childrens
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children
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get proper nurture and attention.
parents
should use their
time
with their
chidren
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children
teach them moral
value
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values
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also
, how to behave in
the
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society.
Secondly
,
nuclear
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family is trending these days. Everyone wants to live in nuclear family
therefore
,
children
do not get
grandparents
love and care but in past, everyone lives in joint family so
children
get their
grandparents
ethics value
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example, Now these days they spend their
time
with
gedgets
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gadgets
and their
moblie
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mobile
phones
it's
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effect
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the effect
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their behaviour and social development. Tackle
this
,
Parents
make sure
children
visit their
grandparents
, use
holybook
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holy book
or tv show which, gives them some
atticates
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activates
.
Grandparents
also
share their story
who
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they enjoy and learn something, In conclusion,
parents
should not downplay their role in child upbringing.
Children
play
vital
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role
to
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the nation so it is important to give them good
ethnical
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value
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values
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not only for themself
also
for
nation
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the nation
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.
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