Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

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day and age, advertising plays a vital role in

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business.

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, it is frequently asserted that the

customers

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are able to

drawn

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to purchase things by advertising. The opponents claim that advertising is so prevalent but it

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no a strong influence on

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for a long time. There are arguments on both sides of

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very topical debate, which I will discuss now. On the one hand, those who support the idea of the

advertisement

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is the best way to persuade the guest to buy the commodities point out the fact that the brand position of merchandises

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able to do via the

advertisement

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.

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, the

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inspires the information of

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the product

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for

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.

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is why the

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will get the product details,

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as

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benefits, applications,

message

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and so on.

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, it is to be true that the commodities are likely to increase the interaction with the guests through the

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. Because of the fact that the

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will

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and people can see wherever. For

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reason, the product will be remembered in the guest’ memory.

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, the supporters of the

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are not able to attract the customer’ s attention in

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long time often state that there

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a variety of tedious

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which has difficulty in drawing the long attention. It is inevitable that the content of

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advertisement

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the advertisement

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is not

impressed

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for

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and even it is not able to express the function of goods.

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, it seems that the corporation may opt for

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communication channels.

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, the

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is possible to be inspired via

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channels

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is

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not well-known and

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not watched by

costumers

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. To sum up, it appears to me that the stronger argument is in favour of advertising which is genuinely successful at convincing the costumers to purchase the goods, with all the advantages of the brand position and the increasing

interactive

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.

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is provided that it have

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great content.