There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Listening to
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has been a popular way of pastime activity for many years. Which types of
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more significant whether it is regional
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or international divides people into two.
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, I personally think that both types are essential since these are used
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entertainment and treatment purposes. The
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and foremost benefit of
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is its smoothening effect.
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, while concentrating on any
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of genre, the listener tends to feel that calmness and relaxation. Due to
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, many medical and psychological disorders are treated using
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,
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, pain and depression.
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, after having a hectic day
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work, it has been often noted that many people often visit clubs and dance to the
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which played there.
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,
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, irrespective of its types, is widely enjoyed and utilised. Regarding the significance of
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based on the origin is difficult to measure as each one has its own value. Regional or folklore
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, could be highly popular among the particular place and these are often part of
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and
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aspects of the locals.
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, it should be preserved and given a respectful position.
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, it does not mean that global hit songs need to be avoided. The
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has captured the global listener's attention only because
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and
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mesmerizing composition. In my opinion, there is no harm in following any
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unless the creation has any hidden propaganda to spread. In conclusion, despite people have different opinions about is it good to follow popular songs, which
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to their place, or everyone should listen only
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regional one, I think both
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of
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need
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to be concentrated on the
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is entertaining and using as medicine.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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