Many people believe that the
education
we get from family is more important than
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receive from
school
. But it seems to me that
education
is not only about studying. It includes all kinds of specialization that we cannot get from family.
Firstly
,
school
is the only place we can learn academically and ethically. There are practice rooms, well-qualified teachers,
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with the brightest goals, and it is an environment where students can fully pay attention to what they want to learn. We all know that the
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pandemic
badly affected child
education
in Mongolia, and there are two full generations with
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lag thanks to quarantine and being
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the Correct article usage
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home
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a year. It proves how crucial
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the
education
we get from
school
and family cannot give us the
education
that children need.
Secondly
, a
school
can give us moral and ethical
education
, There are all kinds of children in the world,
for example
, from poor and rich families,
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or youngest or only child in a family, a
school
can make them one. They teach offspring how to behave properly, how to be good to each other,
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to be the right person. How
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parents spend the money that they have been collecting
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their entire
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? They spend most of their money just to get us higher
education
. It proves how
school
education
can be. Admittedly, I agree with those who argue that
education
from family is more important
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some point. Family
education
lays the foundation of any other learning activities, but it does not give us enough knowledge of bigger
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. To summarize, it seems that
education
from
school
is
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chance to fulfill our goals and it provides us
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qualified and specialized knowledge that family can not offer.