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Some people say that popular tourist destinations are receiving bad effects from travelers. Why does this happen and what can be done to resolve this?

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These days the pollution produced by
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 has threatened the natural environment of some
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 attractions, making it a big problem to be addressed before those
places
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 are completely damaged.
This
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people
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litter
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 these
places
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 and
also
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 suggest some ways forward. The most important reason why
people
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litter
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 these
tourist
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places
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 is that they have little awareness of environmental conservation.
People
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 think that
one
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 plastic bottle or
one
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 wrapper of chips does not matter.What they don’t realize is that if each
tourist
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 has the same thought
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 very soon these natural scenic spots would turn into mountains of
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litter
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.
People
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also
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 don’t know that
this
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 rubbish is mostly of non-biodegradable material and will stay like that forever.Another reason why
people
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 don’t care is that they think it is not their responsibility. They think the onus of keeping these
places
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 clean rests on the authorities. They have to realize that the environment is everyone’s responsibility.
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, the environmental protection facilities are not enough in many
tourist
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 attractions.
People
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 would not
litter
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 these
places
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 if trashcans were there at regular intervals. The
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 step towards sustainable
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 would be that the governments and
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 companies could educate the
tourists
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 about their responsibilities.
Tourists
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 should be made aware through the media and tour operators about responsible
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. They should be made to realise that their careless attitude could kill future
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 and nothing would be left for the gen-
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, the authorities should have proper facilities at
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places
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 and if facilities are not enough according to the number of
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then
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 the number of
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 should be limited. To conclude, it can be said that irresponsible
tourism
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 has led to damage to the natural environment and at many ,
places
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 the
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places
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 have been so much littered that they have ceased being a
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 attraction anymore. The responsibility of saving these spots rests on both — the
tourists
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 and the government.
One
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 should remember the saying, “A good
tourist
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 is
one
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 who leaves behind nothing but footprints and takes away nothing but photographs.
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