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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#countries #people #salaries #country #governments #level
Many
people
 are
of
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the
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concern
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 about the increasing
gap
 between
income
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the income
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 of
people
. While some suggest that
this
gap
 should be controlled by the
governments
, the others
claims
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 it is a necessary factor for the
eceonomic
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economic
deevelopment
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development
 of countries. In my opinion,
government
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the government
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 should set a limit to the increasing difference
of
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 salaries of the
people
.
Moreover
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this
 should be
governments
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 priority among their many responsibilities. The
people
 who
defends
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 the
gap
 between social levels,
declarated
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declared
 that
this
 difference is a must for
growing
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free market
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 economy. As witnessed throughout history, any attempt made by public
authorithies
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authorities
 other than fair taxes
,
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 ended up with big recessions in the economic power of nations. Another
arguement
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argument
 made by these
people
,
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 is the creativity of the
people
 motivated only by the possibility of being levelled up.
In addition
 to
that
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 the initiatives can not be evolved to
maasive
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massive
 companies in an economy
which
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controlled by
third
 parties.
On the other hand
 , the everlasting growth of the
gap
 between social levels sourced by
difference
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the difference
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 between wages, concluded to an untreatable depression upon
society
 and lacking
in
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 understanding between
people
. While one only think about surviving through the day, the other one spends a village's vital expenditure in one
second
 for a luxurious good. Due to the destructive effect on the feeling of justice, peace and harmony in
society
 became irreversibly spoiled.
The history
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 is full of
the
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examples
about
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 the chaos which is created by
this
 social
unequality
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inequality
,
such
 as French Revolution. To conclude, the provision should be made by the
governments
 and the balance between the economic growth and peace of
society
 should be established.
Although
recessed
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 economy has many drawbacks, sustaining
the
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peace in
society
 is the most important duty of
governments
.
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  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
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  • innovate
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