Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of people and there is little can be done to rectify this To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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palys
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society.
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artist
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to enhance their skill.
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is controlling the people's perspective and their behaviour. The notion can be
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by various methods. I agree with the statement. On the one hand, most of the
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has its own
startergy
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strategy

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to gain public views. Creating
conterversy
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and stimulating the public's opinion.
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's idealogy
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creat
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a
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and locking the audients view.
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publishing the
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in their
channer
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, to have
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flavour of the
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to attract the people. To illustrate, all ways
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will be
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in real
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and reel
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can change the lifestyle of a person
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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