Many people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some persons are of the claim, and I personally concur, that the
use
of
bicycle
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as the primary means of transportation has a lot of benefits, others would argue that it has many drawbacks.
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. On the one hand, many are of the suggestion that not being able to be utilized by all is a demerit worthy of note .
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to say that, because of its small base of support, they are of the opinion that individuals with
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disability
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cannot
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them to commute themselves. In the case of an individual with
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,
for example
, they would find it extremely difficult to commute themselves using a bicycle. Due to its structure, they are of the claim that it won't benefit some target population.
However
, I do not agree with
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statement as modifications can be made to address
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.
On the other hand
, some people would argue, and I agree, that the
use
of
this
form of device as the major means of transportation is environmentally friendly, which is one of its paramount merits.
This
is because relative to other means of transport, it does not burn fossil fuel, which releases carbon dioxide and increases the effects of global warming.
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, countries like Netherlands and United Kingdom encourages
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citizens to make
use
of
this
form of transportation as it helps to reduce the effects of climate change. Due to the fact
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aid in tackling the problems related to global warming, I am of
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that its utilization has more benefits to offer. In conclusion, despite the fact that it has a small base of support and cannot be utilized by all as proposed by many, I do not concur as adjustments can be made to suit all.
Also
, it has been proven to be relatively safe for the environment.
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